该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2010-5-10 12:22 只看TA 86楼 |
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i prefer 1st person instead of third person, it would bie more realistic..i feel sorry for her..poor little "girl." I wish this wouls be longer, it's a bit too short. |
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qingnanzhen 发表于 2010-5-15 12:32 只看TA 89楼 |
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文章写得很好,人物描写的很细腻,很值的观看,谢谢楼主 |
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