| 该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-6-28 03:51 只看TA 65楼 |
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| This story is not good. It does not flow at all. Entire theme of the story is all about fuck not addressing the feeling of being on a remote island and the needs for sex. I feel I am reading a story nothing to do with the topic. |
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| liang89520 发表于 2009-6-29 05:28 只看TA 70楼 |
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| 就开头点了一下背景，后面全是肉戏。一点剧情也没有，还不如直接把荒岛删掉那 |
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