[绿意盎然] 【我的女友是别人的炮友】（ 2012-11-16 更新至第七章）（图文）作者：dandygwa311

The story is OK.  You can really make this story a great story.  A lot of places need more detail to describe what and how it happens.   More details on how she changes will be great.  Anyway, thanks a lot for your story.